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Charlotte | "Twin-Flame" How did I hurt you? What words did I say? To keep you this long, And so far away?...A remembered touch A remembered smile A remembered soul That I held for a while I can almost feel you... I can't remember But I will forgive what you said to me That's kept my heart hid... I will you to me Like a child at play, But this is no game And night has no day I'm lost and afraid... Maybe It's just me Too frightend to fly That I cling to the earth Instead of the sky... And maybe your there just out of my view, Soaring and searching, Should I reach for you? Here's my hand... Written by, Charlotte Rose Hamby
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The passenger | I can feel something about my own experience through what you've written here...beautiful ------------------ Dana |
pixelpixie | I feel that the best read poetry is the one you personally vibrate to. Abstract is nice, but personal is superb! |
Charlotte | Dana, Thank you! for the reply. I'm one of many, still awaiting the touch of their Twin-Flame... |
Charlotte | Pikelpixie, Thank you! for your wonderful reply. I agree. Creativity, when matched with your personal vibration is always enlightening... |
Charlotte | I updated this...When I first posted it,I forgot to use the enter key. What a jumbled mess...Please bear with me, I'm new to the computer world!!! |
Randall | ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark |
Charlotte | Thank You! Randall...
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Virgo-AriesArtist | Penetrating and haunting...I can feel your lonelieness vividly, and definitely relate. Look forward to hearing more of your poetry! ------------------ -K "Most people love with restraint As if they were someday to hate We hated gently, carefully As if we were someday to love"-Venus Trines at Midnight |
Charlotte | Awww, Thank You! Virgo-Aries Artist... I have a few more posted here and am feeling that creative Mojo, so may have another one posted shortly. |
Eternal Blue | Just too beautiful for me to express how I find your poem...keep up the good work! |
Charlotte | Thank you! Eternal Blue, You are a wonderful writer as well. |
aqua | both of u r raelly good!!!! nice work Chalotte! |
Charlotte | Thank You! Aqua... |
Eternal Blue | Thank you Charlotte for the praise... (I'm still working on it myself) I reckon you really got a gift. Love to read more from you!
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Charlotte | Thanks!EB, I have four more poems up, 2 are on page 2 and 2 are on page 3. right here in FYWATA... I will try to get some more up soon, you are very sweet! |
Mysticknowflake | bump |